For you my love...

Thought I couldn't live without you
As I saw your blood dripping
My hands red
I had lost you
Without a sign
As I held you close
You slipped away
Into no-whereness
Consumed by the love for yourself

I loved you, I cared for you
You made me feel foolish
So I slit your throat
And now I smile
This no-whereness consumes me
As I hold the blade against my throat
I pull it without a care
For nowhere is where we are meant to be...

5 comments:

sumanta said...

yipeeeeeeeeeeeee

atleast now i can say, i contributed in ur poem..

for all those wondering minds, the title of this poem is suggested by me or i can rather put it as, "the title of this poem is inspired from my suggestion" :)

lots of louv

sumanta said...

Thought I couldn't live without you
As I saw your blood dripping

*Y couldn't u live without me
*when u could feel the joy of my dripping blood

My hands red
I had lost you

*ur hands red
*with the color of accomplishment

Without a sign
As I held you close

*my blood was all over
*to tell u i m no more

You slipped away
into no-whereness

*u pushed me
*into no-whereness

Consumed by the love for yourself
*destroyed by the ones love for oneself

I loved you, I cared for you
You made me feel foolish

*u loved me, u cared for me
*do i still stand as a dead fool

So I slit your throat
And now I smile

*u slit my throat
*n now u smile

This no-whereness consumes me
As I hold the blade against my throat

*this foolishness will now consume u
*n the blade is no sharp for ur throat

I pull it without a care
For nowhere is where we are meant to be...

*dont pull it across
*as i care, dont kill a dead, as i still love u
for me there is no life
*but to know u still alive

*u mean my world
*that i have nomore

*to me, u r my world
*i miss everytim
*to me, u were my love
*"were" is the word i choose
*for me there is no life
*as the blade u chose over me

tried my handss in poems :)

Ray said...

umuah...love you...

Darkness and deep said...

Dark and consuming!!! Very Dark!!

Ray said...

Thanx...thats wat i was goin for...there is hate even in love...