Thought I couldn't live without you
As I saw your blood dripping
My hands red
I had lost you
Without a sign
As I held you close
You slipped away
Into no-whereness
Consumed by the love for yourself
I loved you, I cared for you
You made me feel foolish
So I slit your throat
And now I smile
This no-whereness consumes me
As I hold the blade against my throat
I pull it without a care
For nowhere is where we are meant to be...
yipeeeeeeeeeeeee
ReplyDeleteatleast now i can say, i contributed in ur poem..
for all those wondering minds, the title of this poem is suggested by me or i can rather put it as, "the title of this poem is inspired from my suggestion" :)
lots of louv
Thought I couldn't live without you
ReplyDeleteAs I saw your blood dripping
*Y couldn't u live without me
*when u could feel the joy of my dripping blood
My hands red
I had lost you
*ur hands red
*with the color of accomplishment
Without a sign
As I held you close
*my blood was all over
*to tell u i m no more
You slipped away
into no-whereness
*u pushed me
*into no-whereness
Consumed by the love for yourself
*destroyed by the ones love for oneself
I loved you, I cared for you
You made me feel foolish
*u loved me, u cared for me
*do i still stand as a dead fool
So I slit your throat
And now I smile
*u slit my throat
*n now u smile
This no-whereness consumes me
As I hold the blade against my throat
*this foolishness will now consume u
*n the blade is no sharp for ur throat
I pull it without a care
For nowhere is where we are meant to be...
*dont pull it across
*as i care, dont kill a dead, as i still love u
for me there is no life
*but to know u still alive
*u mean my world
*that i have nomore
*to me, u r my world
*i miss everytim
*to me, u were my love
*"were" is the word i choose
*for me there is no life
*as the blade u chose over me
tried my handss in poems :)
umuah...love you...
ReplyDeleteDark and consuming!!! Very Dark!!
ReplyDeleteThanx...thats wat i was goin for...there is hate even in love...
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